Gathering the Pieces - Page 043 by wquon, literature
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Gathering the Pieces - Page 043
Panel 1 split
• Image: all sleeping
• Text: narrator “that night”
Panel 2
• Image: El waking Alana
• Text: El “Alana…”, Alana “what El (groggy)” El “we must wake Arti” Alana “ why do we need to…”
Panel 3
• Image: Arti slides the girls room door open
• Text: Arti “ok, good. Just making sure” Alana “sure of what?”
Panel 4+
• Image: the groups attention are focused outside as someone sounds an alarm bell
• Text: El “there is danger” Alana “I get El, how could you possibly hav
Gathering the Pieces - Page 042 by wquon, literature
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Gathering the Pieces - Page 042
Panel 1
• Image: sitting in a Japanese style long dinner table, a flash back occurs
• Text: Ell" what I had seen on the obelisk resembles what grandfather gifted you when I was young
• Narration: over the night the group tells of their journey & their new guidance with the obelisk.
Panel 2+
• Image: (flashback, ceremony of family title being passed down, explanation of passing down of family title one of few families chosen to protect it. Reason lost but importance remembered and a phrase of foreign dialog rehearsed) it is a piece of the obelisk (NOTE: we may see some of these ppl later)
• Text: Father "thi
Gathering the Pieces - Page 041 by wquon, literature
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Gathering the Pieces - Page 041
Panel 1 & 2
•Image: comparative panels span page width wise. Stones markings dim & El’s father moans a bit (1st panel)
• Text: father “El?”
Panel 3
•Image: El & father embracing. Arti and Alana in awe of “what the crap just happened”
•Text: father “it is good to see you, daughter” El “father”. Arti to Alana “didn’t he just try to kill us?”
•Narration: as the group talks there has been something amiss in the land. While in meditation El’s father had become blinded with an anger. Stone broke this trance like state…
Gathering the Pieces - Page 040 by wquon, literature
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Gathering the Pieces - Page 040
Panel 1 & 2
• Image: Stone’s marks are glowing. El’s father’s eyes appear dark. Father charges, the group has a defensive stance but are confused. / As he nears the group, Stone steps in the way and lifts an arm. A medium size ‘alchemy’ circle appears (looking more of something from the portals era than new circle patterns)
• Text: El “father?” ‘sound effects’
Gathering the Pieces - Page 039 by wquon, literature
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Gathering the Pieces - Page 039
Panel 1
• Image: out of town a little bit there’s a well-groomed path that leads to a dojo style complex, grand doors open as they approach
• Text: Arti “huh, wouldn’t have pegged her as the ritzy type. I hope there’s food”
Panel 2
• Image: Continuing the come to an open room where the monks are in a trance
• Text: Ell “we must wait" Arti “wait for what?”
Panel 3 +
• Image: El sitting in a meditation pose to wait, the others sitting, standing & such in various poses. It seems to be a bit of a wait. (Stone doesn’t move either)
• Text: narrator
Gathering the Pieces - Page 038 by wquon, literature
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Gathering the Pieces - Page 038
Panel 1
• Image: they emerge from the other side of the portal (still having their beasts)
Panel 2+
• Image: riding through town it seems most know El, they smile and wave. Many aww at Stone. Tik sits on El’s shoulder & makes faces at the kids.
• Text: ‘general greetings’
Panel + last
• Image: Arti & Alana look at each other partly amused & partly puzzled
• Text: Alana “it seems many people know you here” Arti “yea, it’s like they like you or something” El “my family has been here so some way or another for generations” Alana “oh” Arti
Gathering the Pieces - Page 037 by wquon, literature
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Gathering the Pieces - Page 037
Panel 1
• Image: the group surrounding the obelisk & looking at it further
• Text: El “I have seen this before” Arti “this piece over here, I think I’ve been around something like it before” Alana “we need to find out more”
Panel 2+
• Image: group talking
• Text: Alana “I believe this is why we came here, to figure out what this is & what it means. Each of us seem to associate it with something we’ve seen before & we know Stone is a part of this too.” Arti “I’d rather not go back to where I know it from, what about you El” El “yes.
Gathering the Pieces - Page 036 by wquon, literature
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Gathering the Pieces - Page 036
Panel 1
• Image: the group huddled around staring at the “camera” (looking at the plaque)
• Text: Arti “city built around the obelisk blah blah blah” El “it is old, no one knows the origins”
Panel 2
• Image: comparison of Stone & the obelisk. Question marks drawn. Alana chibi with text
• Text: Alana “yea, but the markings on this look similar to stone”
Panel 3
• Image: Stone looks confused as he glances at Tik
• Text: Tik “sorry guys big guys got nothing. His memory is still recovering from whatever happened to him from the trap he escaped”
Gathering the Pieces - Page 035 by wquon, literature
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Gathering the Pieces - Page 035
Panel 1+
• Image: looking at the map. talking while walking through this new town. Light colored brick & stone workmanship.
• Text: Arti “I think we’re at the right place” Alana “of course we’re in the right place… the map says so” Arti “I don’t know I’m not seeing anything like what uncle gramps was talking about.”
Panel last
• Image: they round a corner to see the obelisk, old and worn looking and some chunks are missing. It is a bit taller than stone. El’s pointing to it.
• Text: El “I fairly certain we are here”